I went in to the book with an open mind. Even though some scenes were just too detailed I was enjoying the story. That was until there was so much contradictions, grammatical errors and unexplained situations that I said enough was enough. I have done something I thought I wouldn't do and that was put this down for good and call a DNF. A thorough edit with structure changes could bring amazing light to a story with so much potential. Until than, it's time for me to move on to another book.